celebrating togethernessship

omg
this year on 1. november
my bf and me celebrate our 1 1/2 years togethernessship
yay

the material present is already there...
but last night... when i was in bed... some first idea of a poem popped up into my head
and i had to write it down instantly before i would forget it...

here it goes


all those things that happened to me
are nothing compared to when i met thee
some might say its coincidence
but i like to see it as destiny
youre my heart, my love in every sense
i will hold on tightly till eternity


nothing special...
and i dont really like the last 2 lines...
what do you say...
can somebody help me with their vocabularies?

^o.o^ congrats!and aww o-o thats cuute.o.o i wouldn't mind helping..xD thought i'll try helping thee =O if you want that is?:3

Hey congrats kiri! I wish u and him more happy years ^^ I wish I could say the same of kashi and I but u know..^^;; and I don't think I can be of much help with ure poem cause I lack creativity lol XD

yeah pls everyone help x3

like i said
the last 2 lines... kinda dont fit
i couldnt find any other word that rhymes with "coincidence"
defense, omnipotence, ahem... impotence XD, fence, etc...
but nothing really fits

You're my heart; my seventh sense?
A sense that shall last for eternity? o____o;
Or something with innocence. o_o;

Or... something else. x.x I suck with poems. D:

lmao XD
you stole my innocence
XD

That works. xDDDDD
If he did, that is. o_o;

lol
(yeah he did)